(B2) ANGUS MACPHERSON'S FEEDBACK

  • Really playful concepts, creative ideas 
  • A lot of work in a short amount of time which is good for future work in the industry
  • Posters look great, really cool poster. Information is too small though and doesn’t know what he’s looking at 
  • Will have to really lean in to see what it’s for 
  • Liked the logo treatment in the middle
  • More could be made of it, all look too similar 
  • Would have been nice to see it flipped. On black 
  • He really liked the social media posts 
  • Liked how we did the glitch on the videos and not the people 
  • Can’t see what it’s for or about 
  • The flyer looks like an afterthought and no consideration 
  • Would have been nice to see on a deck 
  • Overall, well impressed 
  • Quality is really high 
  • He really liked the application of the designs and the presentation that other groups had done so, it’s something we should try to do for our designs 
  • The presentation itself it part of the design, it should be a consistent narrative, that tells the story behind the design
  • Deck itself is a design piece/ problem
  • Presenting the design is something that is prevalent in the industry and should always be considered when designing 
  • Decks would be really useful for organising projects for portfolios 
  • A good exercise for PPP would be to make decks and prepare for branding yourself and readying for industry

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